I haven't participated in Sunday Scribblings for a while. It's good to be back. The prompt for this week is: pleasure. My offering is an adaptation of a couple of short pieces I wrote earlier this year. The pleasure of Sunday mornings.
Sunday morning
Window slightly ajar
Light makes art on the screen
My feet poke out
From under sheets
Tickled by a gentle breeze
Outside - birds sing and squawk
Sounds paint through my mind
Thick blobs, blurred at the edges
Trails of even spaced dots
In the lull I tune
to the gentle, regular ticking
of the clock
A little slower than my heartbeat
Cocooned between stretch and doze
I ease my way
into the day
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18 hours ago
Lovely visuals of a Sunday morning. Wish they were all like that.
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What a wonderful return..that lovely feeling in the morning..particularly a Sunday is captured perfectly..here, there was pouring rain and it was so good to be inside listening..Jae
ReplyDeleteNow this is a pleasure everyone should know (not the hangover kind where everything hurts on a Sunday morning). Great piece, fantastic flow to it. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThis sounded like my Sunday morning. Enjoyed it, thanks. Tigerbrite
ReplyDeleteLove "cocooned between stretch and doze"! Lovely picture of waking up"
ReplyDeleteBeautiful verse so easy to visualise in one's mind.
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