From red to green
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These questions, the ones that keep forming in my mind
Holding no respect for the traffic lights of my life
No wishes to intrude and intent to be kind
But when the light is red, there they are; rife
Inside my head, pushing every boundary
Jostling with each other like a couple of young sons
It's a different case when the light is green
The invitation, "Do you have any questions?"
And they are gone. Nowhere to be found
From red to green, will they learn to stay around?
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I wrote this poem in March this year. On Saturday I attended a Speed Poetry Assessment at the Noarlunga Library. What a fantastic experience to have. I took this poem and it was read by 3 established poets (Steve Evans, Tess Driver and Deb Matthews-Zott) and they gave me immediate feedback. It was an inspiring as well as challenging experience. Challenging particularly because I don't have a wealth of experience of discussing my work (in various forms) with others. I was a high achiever at school and did not really receive a lot of feedback over and above excellent work. With the exception of when I was studying Honours Psychology at University I also did not discuss my written work much at University. I am so glad I found the courage to go to the Speed Poetry Assessment on Saturday and actually enjoyed being challenged - "What do you mean by that?" Following the session I was inspired to do more writing and re-writing. One of my rewrites was of the poem (From red to green) which although still a work in progress I would like to post here. I also found it very interesting to hear three different poets comment on and discuss the same poem with me. The feedback was quite different but useful from all three. The rewritten poem is now titled "Traffic lights of my life."
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Traffic lights of my life
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These questions, they constantly form in my mind
Hold no respect for the traffic lights of my life
I have no wish to intrude upon
Nor hurt the feelings of another
But when the light is red, they are rife
Inside my head they push every boundary
Jostle with each other like a couple of young sons
The questions are there
Always the wrong place
The wrong person
The wrong time
The light is red!
Then the light turns green
And I am asked "Do you have any questions?"
But they are gone
Nowhere to be found